league

Greg Bird gets the ball and gets hammered in a crunching tackle by the opposition. The ground shakes the blues supporters are not happy i hear a crack offside the ref called i can't take it he says in his head and starts a scrap blood goes everywhere the ref tried to stop it and got knocked out by Billy Slater. I enjoyed this because i like writing and league.

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The player runs into a smashing tackle by Justin Hunt the stadium shakes the tigers supporters roar. He can taste liquid stuff running down his mouth bulldogs fans are booing. The west tigers pick the ball up the ball Luke Brooks streaks away and grounds the ball under the posts for a easy conversion.